I feel improvement in every post. You can make a solid structural arc for your text and I feel that is the difficult part anyway. Your interesting takes on small details create an interesting mental image for the reader. Keep going! I should try this too.
Thank you Johan, your feedback feels encouraging and warms my heart. I do recommend you to try too, it is quite an interesting experience to write out things in a concrete shape that others can also take part in. I noticed that the act of writing is in itself an act of processing things, in different ways than just by going over them in the mind. What would you like to write about yourself?
Maybe your recent subject itself was the most eye-opening thing for me. Some memories, seemingly unimportant from my past that indirectly affect my decisions even to this day. Things I would like to say to someone, that perhaps, I longer feel like I'm not able to. What I felt when no-one else noticed it. I feel inspired by this concept at the moment.
I feel improvement in every post. You can make a solid structural arc for your text and I feel that is the difficult part anyway. Your interesting takes on small details create an interesting mental image for the reader. Keep going! I should try this too.
Thank you Johan, your feedback feels encouraging and warms my heart. I do recommend you to try too, it is quite an interesting experience to write out things in a concrete shape that others can also take part in. I noticed that the act of writing is in itself an act of processing things, in different ways than just by going over them in the mind. What would you like to write about yourself?
Maybe your recent subject itself was the most eye-opening thing for me. Some memories, seemingly unimportant from my past that indirectly affect my decisions even to this day. Things I would like to say to someone, that perhaps, I longer feel like I'm not able to. What I felt when no-one else noticed it. I feel inspired by this concept at the moment.
Yes. It is quite interesting what you find when you start looking.